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I am a big fan of your work. And I am not an artist. At all. Anyway, The Lost Soul looks great. They don't have tongues or a split jaw ...

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I am a big fan of your work. And I am not an artist. At all.

Anyway,
The Lost Soul looks great. They don't have tongues or a split jaw but it looks great.
The Baron's second horn isn't appearing behind Doom Guy's leg.
The Revenant's arm is behind Doom Guy's left leg, but the Revenant's right leg is in front of the orange pile in front of DG. This makes the Revenant look very short.
The shotgun is noticeably curved. I find that weapons need to be very straight otherwise they look weak. Especially guns since you need a straight barrel to shoot bullets/shells. The trigger is a bit small. Otherwise the shotgun is very impressive and very accurate to the new game.

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hkynkg Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd like to start out my divant account with drawing requests from others : o) so I'm up for anything u want drawn
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22happy22 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
Ok

In Legend of Korra, Tenzen has three kids. In Teen Titans, Raven has to escort three kids and she starts to like them. Make it so Korra and Raven has to take care of the opposite trio of twerps.

In League of Legends the character Sejuani rides a boar. Make it a parody where Sejuani is a biker chick who rides her Hog (motorcycle).
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lvlapple Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for faving :)
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